Re: joni in poetrymagazine.com

[Mark or Travis]

>     With some poetic license, the city might be considered a garden,
with
> buildings growing out of the ground, and might become "ghostly" on a
dark,
> foggy day.
>


Or at night.  Or a smoggy day.  She also mentions dirty trees &
wishing wells as being party of the city (or ghostly garden).  Also
Nathan grumbles at the gray (ghostly gray?).

Thank you, Paul!  Always seemed obvious to me!

Mark in Seattle