On 02/09/2024 10:23, Simon Horman wrote:
> 
> Hi Guilherme,
> 
> Some subjective grammar nits.
> 
>> diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt 
>> b/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt
>> index efc52ddc6864..351730108c58 100644
>> --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt
>> +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt
>> @@ -913,12 +913,16 @@
>>                      the parameter has no effect.
>>  
>>      crash_kexec_post_notifiers
>> -                    Run kdump after running panic-notifiers and dumping
>> -                    kmsg. This only for the users who doubt kdump always
>> -                    succeeds in any situation.
>> -                    Note that this also increases risks of kdump failure,
>> -                    because some panic notifiers can make the crashed
>> -                    kernel more unstable.
>> +                    Only jump to kdump kernel after running the panic
>> +                    notifiers and dumping kmsg. This option increases the
>> +                    risks of a kdump failure, since some panic notifiers
>> +                    can make the crashed kernel more unstable. In the
> 
> nit: In the configurations -> In configurations
> 
>> +                    configurations where kdump may not be reliable,
>> +                    running the panic notifiers can allow collecting more
>> +                    data on dmesg, like stack traces from other CPUS or
>> +                    extra data dumped by panic_print. Notice that some
> 
> nit: Notice that -> Note that
> 
>> +                    code enables this option unconditionally, like
> 
> Maybe: some code enables -> some configurations enable
> 

Hey Simon, tnx for the suggestions, will change in the next version.
Cheers,


Guilherme

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