Hey everybody i wrote a poem last night. COuld you please give me
feed back on it. Oh and can poems, have periods? cause this one does.
Trish
"I Saw"
The rain trickled down
into the sea
layes as if a golden crown
was touched by me.
No one Knew
I saw
The oceans paused
as the diamonds turned
to stone. Rocks into
clouds, Rainbows to coal
No one knew
I saw
The tornado fell into
the sky. Nothing was
left. Not even sreaming
angels. Yet
no one knew. I saw
The fire melted into ice
as once befre. I saw.
But no one knew.
Trish Marie Kyles
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