On February 21, 2005 03:19 pm, M.Canales.es wrote: > Please, review in the next book render the new look for > SBUs-disk_usage-dependencies and installed_programs-libreries blocks. > > The second look great, but not sure about the first.
The SBU section has an empty line between "required diskspace" and "depends on." I'm not sure I like this white space. Can you change it to remove this line and see what it looks like then? Or tell me how to modify the stylesheets here so I can try it locally and then upload the change myself if it's better. As for the list of installed programs and libraries. I'm basing this on Glibc in chapter 6. It doesn't look nice. The individual words installed programs installed libraries are not beside eachother. It looks like: Installed programs: Installed libraries: There will need to be an empty line between those two sections. You can't easily differentiate now between the list of programs and libraries. And the short descriptions: please use the same format as you saw in the PDF version. catchsegv Can be used to... And not as it currently looks like: catchsegv Can be used to This generates a ton of extra lines and more scrolling. It will look better to have the term and description on the same line. It's also more proper from a book layout point of view. -- Gerard Beekmans /* If Linux doesn't have the solution, you have the wrong problem */ -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-book FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
