[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote these words on 04/11/05 13:56 CST: > Author: manuel > Date: 2005-04-11 12:56:07 -0600 (Mon, 11 Apr 2005) > New Revision: 4899 > > Modified: > trunk/BOOK/chapter06/hotplug.xml > Log: > Tags and text corrections.
Hi Manuel, Just a thought about some of the text "corrections" you're doing. In some of the program descriptions, there are multiple sentences. Periods are used to designate the end of one sentence, yet you are pulling out the period from the end of the last sentence. This looks funny, and more importantly, is grammatically incorrect. -- Randy rmlscsi: [GNU ld version 2.15.94.0.2 20041220] [gcc (GCC) 3.4.3] [GNU C Library stable release version 2.3.4] [Linux 2.6.10 i686] 14:34:00 up 9 days, 14:07, 5 users, load average: 1.06, 0.76, 0.59 -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-book FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
