Author: matthew
Date: 2005-05-08 10:14:11 -0600 (Sun, 08 May 2005)
New Revision: 5235
Modified:
trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/svnssh.xml
Log:
Minor wording and tagging improvements
Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml 2005-05-08 16:07:33 UTC (rev
5234)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml 2005-05-08 16:14:11 UTC (rev
5235)
@@ -29,6 +29,7 @@
<listitem><para>Changelog Entries:</para>
<itemizedlist>
+ <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter02/svnssh.xml: Minor wording and
tagging improvements</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter02/anonsvn.xml: Improve docbook
markup</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: We use viewcvs for online repository
browsing, not cvsweb</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: Fix validation error in
chapter04/checkfiles.xml</para></listitem>
Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/svnssh.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/svnssh.xml 2005-05-08 16:07:33 UTC (rev
5234)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/svnssh.xml 2005-05-08 16:14:11 UTC (rev
5235)
@@ -8,10 +8,10 @@
<title>Subversion SSH Access (for editors)</title>
<?dbhtml filename="svnssh.html"?>
-<para>For editors, access is slightly more complicated. You first of
-all need to generate yourself an ssh key-pair. You then need to upload
-your public key into your <filename>~/.ssh</filename> directory on
-belgarath. To generate the keys run:</para>
+<para>For editors, access is slightly more complicated. You first of all need
+to generate an ssh key-pair. You then need to upload your public key into your
+<filename>~/.ssh</filename> directory on belgarath. To generate the keys run:
+</para>
<para><screen><userinput>ssh-keygen -t dsa</userinput></screen></para>
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
them in .ssh (as <filename>id_dsa</filename> and
<filename>id_dsa.pub</filename>) unless you already have ssh keys there.
When prompted for a passphrase just press enter (unless you want to have
-to give the phrase <emphasis>every</emphasis> time you perform a cvs
+to give the phrase <emphasis>every</emphasis> time you perform a subversion
operation. Having generated your keys, upload
<filename>~/.ssh/id_dsa.pub</filename> to belgarath and move it to
<filename>~/.ssh/authorized_keys2</filename> <emphasis>on
@@ -35,13 +35,14 @@
<screen><userinput>svn checkout
svn+ssh://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK lfs-trunk
</userinput></screen>
-<para>If this works, you'll pull the current book into lfs-trunk and you
-will have your own local working copy. You will also have write access so from
-now on be extra careful, but note that <emphasis>no</emphasis> changes will be
made until
-you use a <userinput>svn ci</userinput> command.</para>
+<para>If this works, you'll checkout a copy of the current book to
+<filename class="directory">lfs-trunk</filename> and you will have your own
+local working copy. You will also have write access so from now on be extra
+careful, but note that <emphasis>no</emphasis> changes will be made until you
+issue a <userinput>svn commit</userinput> command.</para>
<para>As with anonymous access, you can update your local copy by simply
-cd'ing into the LFS directory and running:</para>
+<command>cd</command>'ing into the LFS directory and running:</para>
<para><screen><userinput>svn update</userinput></screen></para>
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