Author: matthew
Date: 2005-05-08 10:25:03 -0600 (Sun, 08 May 2005)
New Revision: 5236
Modified:
trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/introduction.xml
Log:
Minor wording and tagging improvements
Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml 2005-05-08 16:14:11 UTC (rev
5235)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml 2005-05-08 16:25:03 UTC (rev
5236)
@@ -29,6 +29,7 @@
<listitem><para>Changelog Entries:</para>
<itemizedlist>
+ <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter03/introduction.xml: Minor
wording and tagging improvements</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter02/svnssh.xml: Minor wording and
tagging improvements</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter02/anonsvn.xml: Improve docbook
markup</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: We use viewcvs for online repository
browsing, not cvsweb</para></listitem>
Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/introduction.xml 2005-05-08 16:14:11 UTC
(rev 5235)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/introduction.xml 2005-05-08 16:25:03 UTC
(rev 5236)
@@ -8,15 +8,17 @@
<title>Introduction</title>
<?dbhtml filename="introduction.html"?>
- <para>Let's get familiar with the basic
- set of commands which all editors will use on an almost daily basis. There
- are many more options available than the ones listed here, so you will want
- to read the Subversion documentation at some point located at
- <ulink url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com/"/>, and run the <userinput>svn
- help</userinput> command.
+ <para>Let's get familiar with the basic set of commands which all editors
will
+ use on an almost daily basis. There are many more options available than
the
+ ones listed here, so you will want to read the Subversion documentation
+ (<ulink url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com/"/>) at some point.
+ <command>svn <option>help</option></command> also provides a useful quick
+ reference for Subversion commands.
</para>
- <para>Some commands have two forms, the long and the short. We'll list both
in
- the descriptions.
+ <para>Some Subversion commands have multiple forms, the canonical command and
+ one or more aliases. We'll list the canonical form and an alias in the
+ descriptions. <command>svn <option>help</option></command> provides a list
+ of all Subversion commands with all of their aliases.
</para>
</sect1>
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