Author: matthew
Date: 2005-05-08 10:30:52 -0600 (Sun, 08 May 2005)
New Revision: 5237
Modified:
trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/checkout.xml
Log:
Minor wording and tagging improvements
Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml 2005-05-08 16:25:03 UTC (rev
5236)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml 2005-05-08 16:30:52 UTC (rev
5237)
@@ -29,6 +29,7 @@
<listitem><para>Changelog Entries:</para>
<itemizedlist>
+ <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter03/checkout.xml: Minor wording
and tagging improvements</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter03/introduction.xml: Minor
wording and tagging improvements</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter02/svnssh.xml: Minor wording and
tagging improvements</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter02/anonsvn.xml: Improve docbook
markup</para></listitem>
Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/checkout.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/checkout.xml 2005-05-08 16:25:03 UTC (rev
5236)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/checkout.xml 2005-05-08 16:30:52 UTC (rev
5237)
@@ -12,10 +12,10 @@
This command is used to pull a Subversion directory such as
<filename>LFS/BOOK</filename> (the LFS book) or <filename>BLFS</filename>
(the BLFS book) from the server. You should only need to do this once. If
- we mess around with the directory structure (as sometimes is necessary),
- you may occasionally need to delete your local working copy and re-check
it out.
- If this is going to be needed, it will usually be because the Editor will
- have made a <emphasis>large</emphasis> change and it'll be announced at
+ we rearrange the directory structure (as is sometimes necessary), you may
+ need to delete your local working copy and re-check it out.
+ If this is going to be needed, it will usually be because an editor will
+ have made a <emphasis>large</emphasis> change and it will be announced at
least on the <filename>lfs-book</filename> list.
</para>
</sect1>
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