On Thu, Apr 06, 2006 at 10:57:13PM +0200, M.Canales.es wrote: > > Some nitpicks: > > Don't should the dedication be removed?
You might think it's an accidental inclusion from the LFS Book itself, but I guess only Gerard can agree to undedicating it :) > In preface.xml that look obsolete: > "(both in the book as well as the FTP server)" > > In chapter02/introduction.xml, change > "viewcvs interface at http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org."; > by > "Trac source browser interface at > http://wiki.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/browser"; Thanks. Amended. > In chapter04/updatechangelog.xml the changelog entries format used should be > updated to the current one used. I'm not sure if I've understood the problem here, but I've had a go at reformatting. New rendering is at http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/~ken/lfs-editors-guide/index.html Ken -- das eine Mal als Tragödie, das andere Mal als Farce -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-book FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
