The overall idea is good but I don't care for the layout.  Instead, I
 would say:

 Your host system should have the following software with the minimum
 versions indicated. This should not be an issue for most modern Linux
 distributions.

 And then just list the packages:

  * Bash-2.05a
  * Binutils-2.12
  * Bzip2-1.0.2
  * etc

I have no preference as to that. I do agree that I don't care much for the layout, but for me, the problem is in the look of the bullets. Perhaps Manuel has a suggestion as to what would look better?

 Also, the sentence

 This second option can also be seen as a gauge of your current Linux
 skills. If this second requirement is too steep, then the LFS book will
 not likely be much use to you at this time.

 Seems a little harsh.

Yes, it does and should probably be changed. Keep in mind that was there before. :)

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JH


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