r8272 - in trunk/BOOK: . chapter01 chapter06

[dnicholson]

Author: dnicholson
Date: 2007-08-06 12:04:15 -0600 (Mon, 06 Aug 2007)
New Revision: 8272

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/perl.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general.ent
Log:
Fix typo and clarify text for Ch. 6 perl


Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml  2007-08-02 17:21:09 UTC (rev 8271)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml  2007-08-06 18:04:15 UTC (rev 8272)
@@ -37,6 +37,16 @@
 -->
 
     <listitem>
+      <para>2007-08-06</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[dnicholson] - Fixed a typo and clarified text on the Perl
+          page. Reported by Shawn.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </listitem>
+
+    <listitem>
       <para>2007-07-31</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/perl.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/perl.xml       2007-08-02 17:21:09 UTC (rev 8271)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/perl.xml       2007-08-06 18:04:15 UTC (rev 8272)
@@ -35,9 +35,9 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Perl</title>
 
-    <para>First create a basic <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file which will 
be
-    referenced in one of Perl's configuration files as well as being used used 
by
-    the testsuite if you run that:</para>
+    <para>First create a basic <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file to be
+    referenced in one of Perl's configuration files as well as the optional
+    testsuite:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo "127.0.0.1 localhost $(hostname)" &gt; 
/etc/hosts</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent      2007-08-02 17:21:09 UTC (rev 8271)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent      2007-08-06 18:04:15 UTC (rev 8272)
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20070731">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "July 31, 2007">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-20070806">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "August 6, 2007">
 <!ENTITY milestone "7.0">
 <!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or 
"x.y[-pre{x}]" -->
 

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