#2326: Modifications to Preface
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 Reporter:  ger...@…                     |       Owner:  lfs-b...@…             
      
     Type:  task                         |      Status:  new                    
      
 Priority:  normal                       |   Milestone:  7.0                    
      
Component:  Book                         |     Version:  SVN                    
      
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Comment(by bdu...@…):

 IN looking at this ticket, the only change I see needed in the Foreword is
 the 5th paragraph:

 This Linux From Scratch book provides ~~readers~~ '''you''' with the
 background and instruction to design and build '''your own''' custom Linux
 systems. This book highlights the Linux from Scratch project and the
 benefits of using this system. ~~Users~~ '''You''' can dictate all aspects
 of ~~their~~ '''your''' system, including directory layout, script setup,
 and security. The resulting system will be compiled completely from the
 source code, and ~~the user~~ '''you''' will be able to specify where,
 why, and how programs are installed. This book allows ~~readers~~
 '''you''' to fully customize Linux systems to ~~their~~ '''your''' own
 needs and allows ~~users~~ '''you''' more control over ~~their~~
 '''your''' system.

 That said, I think this page in particular needs to be updated by Gerard.

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