#2326: Modifications to Preface
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Reporter: ger...@… | Owner: ger...@…
Type: task | Status: assigned
Priority: normal | Milestone: 6.5
Component: Book | Version: SVN
Severity: minor | Keywords:
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Comment(by bdu...@…):
This paragraph seems awkward:
After sorting through issues such as circular dependencies and compile-
time errors, a custom-built Linux system was finally built. It was fully
operational and perfectly usable like any of the other Linux systems out
there at the time. But it was my own creation. It was very satisfying to
have put together such a system yourself. The only thing better would have
been to create each piece of software yourself. This was the next best
thing.
I suggest s/yourself/myself/
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