[email protected] wrote:

> +  as a host for building the current book.  It is recommended you use the
> +  <quote>-nosrc</quote> or <quote>-min</quote> versions of the LiveCD with 
> the
 > +  current book's instructions.

I don't really like the "It is recommended..." phrase.  I think there 
are several alternatives:

We recommend...
You should use...
[Currently] The best versions are...

or a more complete rewrite:

The <quote>-nosrc</quote> or <quote>-min</quote> editions of the LiveCD
are the most appropriate versions for building a current LFS system.

   -- Bruce
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