On 14/04/2010 22:31, Bruce Dubbs wrote: > [email protected] wrote: > >> + as a host for building the current book. It is recommended you use the >> +<quote>-nosrc</quote> or<quote>-min</quote> versions of the LiveCD with >> the > > + current book's instructions. > > I don't really like the "It is recommended..." phrase. I think there > are several alternatives: > > We recommend... > You should use... > [Currently] The best versions are... > > or a more complete rewrite: > > The<quote>-nosrc</quote> or<quote>-min</quote> editions of the LiveCD > are the most appropriate versions for building a current LFS system.
Thanks for the review, Bruce. I went with the last suggestion, which reads a lot better. Regards, Matt. -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-book FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
