Tony Morgan wrote: >I find both the original and Peter's change to be poor >grammar/structure. I would suggest one of the following: > >s/(see the Section 1.3, “Resources” section of this book)/(see the >"Section 1.3. Resources" section of this book)/
Definitely an improvement :-) How about: s/(see the Section 1.3, “Resources” section of this book)/(refer to "Section 1.3. Resources" of this book)/ 'section' is used only one time. -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-dev FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/ Unsubscribe: See the above information page
