Armin K. wrote:
> On 02/18/2014 05:15 AM, Armin K. wrote:

> You have missed 3 trivial fixes:
>
>>>
>>> Modified: branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter05/xz.xml

>>> -    <title>Installation of Xz-Utils</title>
>>> +    <title>Installation of Xz</title>


> Title says Xz-Utils, rest of the page says Xz. Chapter 6 has Xz as
> title. Consistency

There were a couple other places where Utils was mentioned.  I changes 
those too.  Including Chapter 6.

>>> Modified: branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter06/flex.xml

>>> -      <varlistentry id="libfl.so">
>>> -        <term><filename class="libraryfile">libfl.so</filename></term>
>>> +      <varlistentry id="libfl">
>>> +        <term><filename class="libraryfile">libfl</filename></term>
>>>           <listitem>
>>>             <para>The <filename class="libraryfile">flex</filename> 
>>> library</para>
>>> -          <indexterm zone="ch-system-flex libfl.so">
>>> -            <primary sortas="c-libfl.so">libfl.so</primary>
>>> +          <indexterm zone="ch-system-flex libfl">
>>> +            <primary sortas="c-libfl">libfl</primary>

> This is with consistency with other packages. They don't list the
> extension if library is .so.

OK.

>>> Modified: branches/systemd/BOOK/chapter06/mpfr.xml

>>> -<screen><userinput remap="configure">./configure  --prefix=/usr        \
>>> -             --enable-thread-safe \
>>> -             
>>> --docdir=/usr/share/doc/mpfr-&mpfr-version;</userinput></screen>
>>> +<screen><userinput remap="configure">./configure --prefix=/usr        \
>>> +            --enable-thread-safe \
>>> +            
>>> --docdir=/usr/share/doc/mpfr-&mpfr-version;</userinput></screen>

> This package has two whitespaces between ./configure and --prefix=/usr,
> so I changed it to just one.

OK.  The are in my sandbox but I'll commit later when I have something a 
little more substantive.

   -- Bruce

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