On 02/24/2017 10:12 AM, bdu...@higgs.linuxfromscratch.org wrote:
Author: bdubbs
Date: Fri Feb 24 08:12:41 2017
New Revision: 11190

Log:
Text clarification

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml  Sun Feb 19 15:06:02 2017        (r11189)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml  Fri Feb 24 08:12:41 2017        (r11190)
@@ -112,8 +112,8 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="test">su nobody -s /bin/bash \
           -c "PATH=$PATH make RUN_EXPENSIVE_TESTS=yes 
check"</userinput></screen>

-    <para>The test-getlogin test is known to fail on a virtual console, but
-    passes if run in a X terminal.</para>
+    <para>The test-getlogin test is known to fail on a virtual console such as
+    the chroot envronment here, but passes if run in a X terminal.</para>

I think we've discussed this a few times, but for review. The choice of indefinite article is defined by phonetics (sound), not written representation.

's/a X/an X/'

--DJ

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