On Fri, Feb 24, 2017 at 08:43:02PM -0600, DJ Lucas wrote:
>
>
> On 02/24/2017 10:12 AM, bdu...@higgs.linuxfromscratch.org wrote:
> > Author: bdubbs
> > Date: Fri Feb 24 08:12:41 2017
> > New Revision: 11190
> >
> > Log:
> > Text clarification
> >
> > Modified:
> > trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml
> >
> > Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml
> > ==============================================================================
> > --- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml Sun Feb 19 15:06:02 2017
> > (r11189)
> > +++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml Fri Feb 24 08:12:41 2017
> > (r11190)
> > @@ -112,8 +112,8 @@
> > <screen><userinput remap="test">su nobody -s /bin/bash \
> > -c "PATH=$PATH make RUN_EXPENSIVE_TESTS=yes
> > check"</userinput></screen>
> >
> > - <para>The test-getlogin test is known to fail on a virtual console, but
> > - passes if run in a X terminal.</para>
> > + <para>The test-getlogin test is known to fail on a virtual console
> > such as
> > + the chroot envronment here, but passes if run in a X terminal.</para>
>
> I think we've discussed this a few times, but for review. The choice of
> indefinite article is defined by phonetics (sound), not written
> representation.
>
> 's/a X/an X/'
>
> --DJ
>
for what its worth the word environment could also use a touch up.
commit 036f45e888b25974f12d0f22f705d4930562d09b
Author: bdubbs <bdubbs@4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689>
Date: Sat Feb 25 04:18:08 2017 +0000
Typo
git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11191
4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
diff --git a/chapter06/coreutils.xml b/chapter06/coreutils.xml
index a753bb4..50e9d47 100644
--- a/chapter06/coreutils.xml
+++ b/chapter06/coreutils.xml
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
-c "PATH=$PATH make RUN_EXPENSIVE_TESTS=yes
check"</userinput></screen>
<para>The test-getlogin test is known to fail on a virtual console such as
- the chroot envronment here, but passes if run in a X terminal.</para>
+ the chroot envronment here, but passes if run in an X terminal.</para>
<para>Remove the temporary group:</para>
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