On Wed, 17 Jun 2020 at 22:01, Pierre Labastie via lfs-dev <lfs-dev@lists.linuxfromscratch.org> wrote: > > Please tell us what you think of: > http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/~pierre/lfs-svn/index.html > (I've not bee able to remove the latin numbering in the "Preliminary > material")
Seems a much better separation of the "introductory" and the "practical" material. Still prefer this one with a "Temporary" added, so 7. Entering Chroot and Building Additional Temporary Tools so as to reinforce the "Temporary" nature. Also suggest that 7.17. Finishing Temporary Tools reads as more of a 7.17 Cleaning up and Saving the Temporary Tools environment or perhaps, 7.17 Cleaning up and Saving the Chroot environment than a "finishing" Given your note in another thread, as to the Chroot files being overwritten, it might be worth making the one final note, reminding people that once they start using the Chroot to build the LFS system, it's no longer the Chroot that they started Chapter 8 with, into a Note box in its own right And there's a typo in the current reminder: Unfortunatly, all the temporary tools will be removed, too. it's missing the "e" from Unfortunately, -- http://lists.linuxfromscratch.org/listinfo/lfs-dev FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/ Unsubscribe: See the above information page
