Reviewers: Reinhold, J_lowe, Message: thanks, updated.
http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2329 Documentation/notation/input.itely:2329: Displaying a music expression in LilyPond notation can be On 2011/04/19 11:36:41, J_lowe wrote:
is the word 'notation' redundant?
I don't think so -- the point is that you'll see a music expression in that particular format, rather than seeing the music expression written in scheme. What's the format? "lilypond notation". (note that this part is just a copy&paste, not any new material that I wrote) I'm certainly open to fixing it if this part is unclear, though. Hmm... what about "LilyPond input notation" ? http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2358 Documentation/notation/input.itely:2358: See @rextend{Displaying music expressions}. On 2011/04/19 11:36:41, J_lowe wrote:
Would this be better as an @seealso? I am guessing there is some more
'stuff' to
go in here else is there a need for an @node just for this?
Dunno. One option would be to move the material from scheme-tutorial into this particular spot, but then that section would just be a ref as well. I figure that if we're going to have a node that's just a ref, it might as well be here, since the actual material is very scheme-heavy. http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2374 Documentation/notation/input.itely:2374: be jumbled together in the same file. The output looks like this: On 2011/04/19 11:36:41, J_lowe wrote:
is 'jumble' appropriate for non-English Speakers - suggest 'mixed'. :)
done. :) http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2386 Documentation/notation/input.itely:2386: The syntax is a tab-delimited line, with at two fixed fields on On 2011/04/19 11:36:41, J_lowe wrote:
missing word I think ...with at *least* two fixed fields... (?)
Thanks, I removed the "at". "... with two fixed fields on each line...". http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode2394 Documentation/notation/input.itely:2394: python. This can be very useful for researchers wishing to On 2011/04/19 11:36:41, J_lowe wrote:
too many 'This.. This...' run on the sentence thus:
...such as python, and can be ...
thanks, done. Description: Doc: writing music events to a .notes file. Please review this at http://codereview.appspot.com/4438054/ Affected files: M Documentation/notation/input.itely _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list [email protected] http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
