http://codereview.appspot.com/5096046/diff/1/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely File Documentation/notation/pitches.itely (right):
http://codereview.appspot.com/5096046/diff/1/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode258 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:258: If you carefully consider all the rules above and remember that the Probably a bit too contorted in the beginning. Just "One consequence of these rules is that" would be quite more concise, decreasing the chances of the reader falling asleep before he gets to the conclusion. Graham's warning against complex language was quite valid; the "monosyllabic" version in the mail exchange a definite improvement. The levity of language makes it fit less well with a reference manual, though. Cutting down the starting sentence of the version quoted here seems still prudent. http://codereview.appspot.com/5096046/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list [email protected] https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
