Mimi Zohar <zo...@linux.vnet.ibm.com> wrote:

> +keyctl print returns an ascii hex copy of the sealed key, which is in 
> standard

I'd quote 'keyctl print' just so it's obvious where the command ends and the
descriptive text starts.

> +Usage:
> +  keyctl add encrypted name "new key-type:master-key-name keylen" ring
> +  keyctl add encrypted name "load key-type:master-key-name keylen hex_blob" 
> ring
> +  keyctl update keyid "update key-type:master-key-name"
> +
> +where 'key-type' is either 'trusted' or 'user'.

I recommend adding some example commands with all the arguments substituted.
Nothing helps get to grip with an API like knowing what a command is supposed
to look like when it's actually used.

> +static int trusted_tpm_send(u32 chip_num, unsigned char *cmd, int buflen)

There are still a lot of places in here where you should probably be using
const and size_t.

> +static int my_get_random(unsigned char *buf, int len)
> +{
> +     struct tpm_buf *tb;
> +     int ret;
> +
> +     tb = kzalloc(sizeof *tb, GFP_KERNEL);
> +     if (!tb)
> +             return -ENOMEM;
> +     ret = tpm_get_random(tb, buf, len);

Using kzalloc() rather than kmalloc() is a waste of time, I'd've thought.
It's a temporary buffer.  Does it really need to be precleared?

> +     ret = tpm_pcr_extend(TPM_ANY_NUM, pcrnum, hash);
> +     return ret;

Merge.

> +static int trusted_update(struct key *key, const void *data, size_t datalen)
> +{
> ...
> +     *(datablob + datalen) = '\0';

That's what [] is for.

> +     if (new_o)
> +             kfree(new_o);

kfree() can handle a NULL pointer.

> +     if (new_o->pcrlock)
> +             ret = pcrlock(new_o->pcrlock);
> +     rcu_assign_pointer(key->payload.data, new_p);
> +     call_rcu(&p->rcu, trusted_rcu_free);

Should there be a check for pcrlock() failure?

> +/* not already defined in tpm.h - specific to this use */
> +#define TPM_TAG_RQU_COMMAND          193
> +#define TPM_TAG_RQU_AUTH1_COMMAND    194
> ...

Values defined for TPM hardware access really ought to be in a separate file
in include/linux/.  They aren't strictly specific to the trusted key
implementation here; that may be the only user currently in the kernel, but
that doesn't mean there can't be another user.

David
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