Gilad Ben-Yossef wrote:

> It's August soon, a time where wave after wave of scortching heat and
> humidity hit the already overtaxed people of Israel, a time where hordes
> of school children run amock unchecked in the streets, a time where
> every self respecting Penguin looks for a little A/C, some highly
> technical (and this year also some less technical) lectures, a wee bit
> of meeting old and new friends and of course a notch of fun - a contest
> where Geeks face Nerds in the ultimate challange of geek Trivia...

Wow...

Almost 100 words, without even one place to breath...

Instead of 3 commas at the end of the sentence, wasn't it better to
spread them over the sentence?

Are you sure that the journalists that we plan to invite, will
understand this announcement?  Isn't it too long for them?

I would give it as an excercise for students of English grammar - to
analyze this sentence...

In a second thinking - no thanks; they would kill me for that.

Now we should all wait for the Marc to translate it to Latin...  ;-)

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