Gilad Ben-Yossef wrote:
It's August soon, a time where wave after wave of scortching heat and humidity hit the already overtaxed people of Israel, a time where hordes of school children run amock unchecked in the streets, a time where every self respecting Penguin looks for a little A/C, some highly technical (and this year also some less technical) lectures, a wee bit of meeting old and new friends and of course a notch of fun - a contest where Geeks face Nerds in the ultimate challange of geek Trivia...
Wow...
Almost 100 words, without even one place to breath...
Instead of 3 commas at the end of the sentence, wasn't it better to spread them over the sentence?
Are you sure that the journalists that we plan to invite, will understand this announcement? Isn't it too long for them?
This was not a press release. the press release is in Hebrew and writtne by someone much more coherent then I :-)
I would give it as an excercise for students of English grammar - to analyze this sentence...
In a second thinking - no thanks; they would kill me for that.
Give it to Word 2003 grammer tool, then :-))
Now we should all wait for the Marc to translate it to Latin... ;-)
YES, please. I want one of those :-)))
Fear me, for I am incoherent Gilad
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