Hi Luigi- Same comments/concerns about the citations you offer here. Specifically:
> May I suggest: > > http://biblio.info.ucl.ac.be/2007/415406.pdf want to make sure that this is a stable document to reference (i.e. it will be around on that web site for many years to come) > You can cite: > > http://www.net.t-labs.tu-berlin.de/papers/IB-CCLIM-07.pdf > http://www.net.t-labs.tu-berlin.de/papers/KIF-ADDITLCAWISKAI-11.pdf same comment as above. > On this point you can cite: > > http://www.computer.org/csdl/mags/ic/preprint/mic2012990288-abs.html This is the same reference you offered for "lisp-introduction-01". At a minimum, that abstract needs to be re-written so that it makes sense. Right now, it says: The Internet has been created for interconnecting few hundreds networks, but is now close to one billion hosts, grouped in 40,000 Autonomous Systems, using more than 400,000 prefixes. Such a situation raises scalability issues that have driven both academia and industry to review the current Internet Architecture in the light of the Locator/Identifier Split paradigm. In particular, the Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF) has adopted and is actively designing and developing the Locator/ID Separation Protocol (LISP). However, changing the routing and addressing architecture of the Internet in an incrementally deployable manner Several constraints impact such a design. We use LISP as reference to describe the different design choices necessary to achieve deployability, which is the ultimate goal of any new Future Internet architecture. Furthermore, we showcase several alternate usages of LISP, which go beyond improving the Internet scalability. I realize that you are not a native English speaker but this text, especially the sentence fragment that begins "However, changing the routing...", is so badly written as to be almost unreadable. I also reiterate my concern that a citation that points to this web page 1) may not be stable and 2) is to an abstract for a document that one needs to pay to download. > You can cite: > > http://www.net.t-labs.tu-berlin.de/papers/IB-CCLIM-07.pdf > http://www.net.t-labs.tu-berlin.de/papers/KIF-ADDITLCAWISKAI-11.pdf same question/comment as my first regarding stability. > In this case this paper might be useful: > > http://inl.info.ucl.ac.be/system/files/Networking12-CRV.pdf same question/comment as my first regarding stability. I don't doubt that the materials you have reference is valuable; I just want to make sure that they are likely to be accessible to potential readers when and long after the LISP intro and architecture documents are published. --Vince _______________________________________________ lisp mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp
