While it is not a strict rule, it is usually better to point to a
definition rather than copy it, and much better to point to it rather
than to copy and modify it.
Yours,
Joel
On 10/1/14, 7:48 PM, Albert Cabellos wrote:
Hi Fabio
Thanks for your comments, please find below our answers:
On Fri, Sep 26, 2014 at 2:28 AM, Fabio Maino <[email protected]>
wrote:
Albert, Damien, this is a very good document, that I think fits
very well with the charter requirements. I like that you keep it
short, dry, and to the point.
From a structure perspective, I don't see a Definition of Terms
section. Maybe you could point to RFC6830 definitions, or copy
those needed in this document (XEID is possibly the only term that
is not already in RFC6830 glossary). I like that you didn't use new
terminology.
Find below a proposed "Definitions of Terms", We have used a
simplified version of RFC6830,RFC6832,RFC6833 definitions, we don´t
need so much detail and this way the text is lighter and easier to
understand:
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