Manuel,
Thank you for your OTB docs.
Here is a review of the Overview docs. Can you please see if my comments make sense, and update text if appropriate.

There are a couple of minor grammar comments I'll address again after you have a look at this first round of comments.


   Image Processing¶

ORFEO Toolbox library (OTB) is a high performance library for image processing targeted on remote sensing.
/Cameron: I suggest a minor rewording:
ORFEO Toolbox library (OTB) is a high performance [geographic image processing] library targeted on *targeting* remote sensing./

/Cameron: Could you please include 1 to 3 sentences describing what Image Processing is and maybe a sentence describing what remote sensing is. What are the sort of things that Image Processing is all about? The reader is likely to know very little about geospatial, and won't know what the unique issues are regargd They may be a manager, they may be a general programmer without a geospatial background. "Geospatial Image Processing is the act of ... It is typically used to ... "/

OTB has been funded the French Space Agency (CNES) in the frame of the Methodological Part of the ORFEO Accompaniement Program

/Cameron: Again, I suggest generalising the description above. It is good to mention the French Space Agency, but is probably too detailed to mention specific programs as 98% of new users won't be interested in it.
/

to prepare, accompany and promote the use and the exploitation of the images derived from Pleiades (PHR) and Cosmo-Skymed (CSK) systems.

/Cameron: You might want to describe the types of images collected, and use as an example to illustrate your description above.

/It has been actively developed since 2006.
/
Cameron: Can add more words about the stability of OTB. Maybe say that it has been "deployed in production since ...". Maybe mention the breath of high profile users of OTB?
/

OTB is distributed as an open source library of image processing algorithms. OTB is based on the medical image processing library ITK and offers particular functionalities for remote sensing image processing in general and for high spatial resolution images in particular.


     Core Features


   * image access: optimized read/write access for most of remote
     sensing image formats, meta-data access, visualization;
   * orthorectification and Map Projection
   * calibration functionnalities
   * /Cameron: Say either "calibration" or "calibration functions"/
   * image fusion
   * filtering: blurring, denoising, enhancement;
   * feature extraction: interest points, alignments, lines;
   * object detection
   * image segmentation: region growing, watershed, level sets;
   * classification: K-means, SVM, Markov random fields;
   * object-based image analysis
   * geospatial analysis
   * SAR data analysis
   * change detection.


     Details¶

*Website:* http://www.orfeo-toolbox.org/

*Licence:* CeCILL

/Cameron: As CeCILL is not directly OSI approved, I suggested adding "(CeCILL is compatible with GPL and enhanced to address French law)"/

*Software Version:* 3.8.0

*Supported Platforms:* Linux, Mac, Windows

*API Interfaces:* C++

*Commercial Support:* http://www.osgeo.org/search_profile


     Quickstart¶

   * Quickstart documentation

/Cameron: I've only quickly skimmed the Quickstart and haven't had time to do a proper review. However my first stand-out comment is that the Quickstart should not be describing the C++ interface as part of the OTB library. (In general, our users will not be programmers.) Instead just include the Monteverdi description (probably expanded) /

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