Author: jhuntwork
Date: 2006-02-09 22:02:39 -0700 (Thu, 09 Feb 2006)
New Revision: 1398
Modified:
trunk/doc/README
Log:
Typos/slight modifications to the README.
Modified: trunk/doc/README
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc/README 2006-02-08 04:01:50 UTC (rev 1397)
+++ trunk/doc/README 2006-02-10 05:02:39 UTC (rev 1398)
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
PACKAGES
===========================
-Available packages on this cd for your use:
+Available packages on this CD for your use:
Xorg (X Window System Environment)
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
CONFIGURING X
===========================
-The Live CD attempts to configure X for your video card automatically. The
+The LiveCD attempts to configure X for your video card automatically. The
process may fail if you have more than one video card, or if your video card
doesn't support 24-bit color depth.
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@
* /etc/ssh/ssh_host_dsa_key, /etc/ssh/ssh_host_rsa_key
Create those files as described in the ssh-keygen(1) manual page. If you
- don't fo that, random host keys will be generated for you automatically
+ don't do that, random host keys will be generated for you automatically
during the boot process. This is less secure, because you can't verify
them.
@@ -196,8 +196,5 @@
THANKS
===========================
-Special thanks to Alexander Patrakov, Andrew Sanch, Archaic, Matthew Burgess,
-Kevin Fleming, Jim Gifford, Justin Knierim, Robert Connolly, Bruce Dubbs,
-Roel Neefs and the many others in the LFS community whose suggestions & support
-helped create this CD. Also thanks to Gerard Beekmans for the LFS project,
-without which there would be no CD.
+Many thanks to all whose suggestions, support and hard work have helped create
+this CD.
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