Good point.  I'll make the change.

Thanks!
Alia

On Mon, Feb 19, 2018 at 7:47 PM, Spencer Dawkins <
spencerdawkins.i...@gmail.com> wrote:

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> I'm sorry I didn't notice this during internal review, but
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> "The LSR Working Group is formed by merging the isis and ospf WGs and will
> take
> on all their existing adopted work at the time of chartering"
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> will seem odd after the working group is chartered, because it's
> present/future
> tense. Just guessing, but perhaps something like
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> "The LSR Working Group was formed by merging the isis and ospf WGs and
> assigning all their existing adopted work at the time of chartering to LSR"
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> ?
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