Good point. I'll make the change. Thanks! Alia
On Mon, Feb 19, 2018 at 7:47 PM, Spencer Dawkins < spencerdawkins.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for > charter-ietf-lsr-00-09: Yes > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-lsr/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > I'm sorry I didn't notice this during internal review, but > > "The LSR Working Group is formed by merging the isis and ospf WGs and will > take > on all their existing adopted work at the time of chartering" > > will seem odd after the working group is chartered, because it's > present/future > tense. Just guessing, but perhaps something like > > "The LSR Working Group was formed by merging the isis and ospf WGs and > assigning all their existing adopted work at the time of chartering to LSR" > > ? > > >
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