Roman - Thanx for the review. I have uploaded V7 of the draft to address your comments.
Responses inline. > -----Original Message----- > From: Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <[email protected]> > Sent: Wednesday, September 18, 2019 7:45 AM > To: The IESG <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected]; Uma Chunduri > <[email protected]>; [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-06: > (with COMMENT) > > Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-06: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > (1) Section 3.1. The two “NOTE” statements in this section seem to conflict: > -- NOTE: These timers are NOT applicable to a router which is preparing to do > a > planned restart. > > -- NOTE: The timer T3 is only used by a restarting router. [Les:] I have added text indicating that T1/T2 can be used both by a restarting router and starting router (details were already provided in the respective sections later in the document) but that T3 is only used by a restarting router. The second NOTE has been deleted. > > (2) Per the definition of the “Remaining Time” field, when is it the > “remaining > holding time” vs. “recommended holding time" [Les:] I have removed the term "recommended" which is not otherwise used in the document. > > (3) Editorial Nits: > -- Multiple places. s/signalling/signaling/g [Les:] It depends whether you are British or not. 😊 As the original lead author of RFC 5306 was British I have conformed to the British spelling. If you think that is not right, I suggest we let the RFC Editor decide. Les > _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
