Hi Eric,

On 5/11/20, 3:50 PM, "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <[email protected]> wrote:

    Peter,

    I will have a look for Alvaro's reply to Barry's comment then :)

https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/lsr/EcufJn28CFrGkfQ2k6LUOYBcZXc/

Thanks,
Acee

    The suggested text below will fix the nit indeed.

    Thank you

    -éric

    -----Original Message-----
    From: Peter Psenak <[email protected]>
    Date: Monday, 11 May 2020 at 19:14
    To: Eric Vyncke <[email protected]>, The IESG <[email protected]>
    Cc: "[email protected]" 
<[email protected]>, "[email protected]" 
<[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, "Acee Lindem (acee)" 
<[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]>
    Subject: Re: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: 
(with COMMENT)

        Hi Eric,

        please see inline:

        On 11/05/2020 18:02, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker wrote:
        > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
        > draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: No Objection
        > 
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        > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
        > COMMENT:
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        > 
        > Thank you for the work put into this document. The document is easy 
to read.
        > 
        > Like other ADs, I wonder why the IS-IS and OSPF are separate 
documents.

        Alvaro has responded to similar query from Barry Leiba.

        > 
        > Please find below one NIT.
        > 
        > I hope that this helps to improve the document,
        > 
        > Regards,
        > 
        > -éric
        > 
        > == NIT ==
        > 
        > -- section 4 --
        > The "one" is ambiguous in "the router MUST advertise the smallest 
one." even if
        > we can guess that it is not "interface" ;-)

        ok, what would you like to say instead "one"?

        Would this be better:

        If a router has multiple interfaces with different capabilities of 
        reading the maximum label stack depth, the router MUST advertise the 
        smallest value found across all of its interfaces.

        thanks,
        Peter


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