This I-D changes the names of some bits in the identity cf RFC8667. I think
that the description clause should then give the mapping to the RFC8667 name.
I see this for
lo-bit
pe-bit
af-bit
These may be excellent names but they are not what RFC8667 specifies!
As the YANG doctor review says, the description should reference RFC and
section thereof for all identity such as r-bit.
The I-D refences
RFC8102
draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa
which need adding to the I-D References
Perhaps in the YANG augment
OLD
"This augments ISIS protocol configuration
with segment routing.";
NEW
"This augments ISIS protocol configuration
with segment routing for the MPLS data plane.";
Tom Petch
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Subject: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-19.txt
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-19.txt is now available. It is a work
item of the Link State Routing (LSR) WG of the IETF.
Title: A YANG Data Model for IS-IS Segment Routing for the MPLS Data Plane
Authors: Stephane Litkowski
Yingzhen Qu
Pushpasis Sarkar
Ing-Wher Chen
Jeff Tantsura
Name: draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-19.txt
Pages: 31
Dates: 2023-12-30
Abstract:
This document defines a YANG data module that can be used to
configure and manage IS-IS Segment Routing for MPLS data plane.
The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang/
There is also an HTML version available at:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-19.html
A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-19
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