This I-D changes the names of some bits in the identity cf RFC8667. I think that the description clause should then give the mapping to the RFC8667 name. I see this for lo-bit pe-bit af-bit These may be excellent names but they are not what RFC8667 specifies!
As the YANG doctor review says, the description should reference RFC and section thereof for all identity such as r-bit. The I-D refences RFC8102 draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa which need adding to the I-D References Perhaps in the YANG augment OLD "This augments ISIS protocol configuration with segment routing."; NEW "This augments ISIS protocol configuration with segment routing for the MPLS data plane."; Tom Petch ________________________________________ From: Lsr <lsr-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org <internet-dra...@ietf.org> Sent: 31 December 2023 06:30 To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org Cc: lsr@ietf.org Subject: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-19.txt Internet-Draft draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-19.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Link State Routing (LSR) WG of the IETF. Title: A YANG Data Model for IS-IS Segment Routing for the MPLS Data Plane Authors: Stephane Litkowski Yingzhen Qu Pushpasis Sarkar Ing-Wher Chen Jeff Tantsura Name: draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-19.txt Pages: 31 Dates: 2023-12-30 Abstract: This document defines a YANG data module that can be used to configure and manage IS-IS Segment Routing for MPLS data plane. The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang/ There is also an HTML version available at: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-19.html A diff from the previous version is available at: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-19 Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at: rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list Lsr@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list Lsr@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr