Hi Carsten
The new text on regulatory constraints reads fine: it is enough to
remind readers that there are legal as well as technical constraints. I
had not intended to suggest that EN300 220-1 should be included in the
text. I'll add more on this in a new thread.
Regards - Charles
On 31/03/2013 13:54, Carsten Bormann wrote:
On Mar 31, 2013, at 12:34, Charles Palmer <[email protected]>
wrote:
I've read the new draft and offer some suggestions, mostly editorial, but there
are a couple of other constraints that I think might merit mentioning
(particularly regularory), and a couple of questions I have embedded in the
text. The edited version is here:
Thanks, those suggestions did allow me to improve the text.
I've left out the specific reference to EN 300 220-1 (assuming that was what
you meant), but did add a bit of reference to regulatory issues (since we
aren't defining terminology for them, a little reminder of them is all that is
needed).
I already had changed all the lists that summarize the class numbers into
tables; I was wondering whether examples in those tables help or give the
impression the examples are the definition. In the end I did add the examples
to the Ex table.
I'm not sure we want to give too many examples for how the various classes go
together; this would be ratholing quickly, and I trust readers will have enough
phantasy to do this on their own.
So this makes the -03, just submitted:
Htmlized: http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lwig-terminology-03
Diff: http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lwig-terminology-03
In separate news, I've also added Ari Keränen as a co-author, who has supplied
and edited some of the power text.
Grüße, Carsten
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Regards - Charles Palmer
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