First impression, nice. Simple but elegant and to the point. I would do three things:
1. Make the slogan pop a little more so it grabs your attention after the title. 2. A simple list of features with link to more detail, 2. Deaccentuate the development team. On Jan 20, 2010, at 04:05 , MT wrote: > Hi guys, > > I'm in the final stages of redesigning our website, you can see it here... > (Once completed, it'll be moved to our proper domain of course) > > http://web.me.com/theescapers/ > > Any advice/comments/flaming gratefully received. > > You can see the old one here... > > www.theescapers.com > > Thanks a lot! > > MT > > [Non-text portions of this message have been removed] > > [Non-text portions of this message have been removed] ------------------------------------ MacSB email guidelines: http://tinyurl.com/2g55d6 Use MacSB-Talk for off topic messages: http://groups.google.com/group/macsb-talk Yahoo! Groups Links <*> To visit your group on the web, go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/macsb/ <*> Your email settings: Individual Email | Traditional <*> To change settings online go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/macsb/join (Yahoo! ID required) <*> To change settings via email: [email protected] [email protected] <*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: [email protected] <*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to: http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
