MT
First of all good luck. Your product looks great and I am sure to try it.
Second of all I found your videos confusing. I dont know if these are new or 
old, but I would suggest when you are doing videos to reduce your screen 
resolution to maximum 1024 wide.  Also the jumping around combined with the 
focusing and magnification with black out, becomes very confusing, and I felt I 
didnt know where I was. I know that making videos is a pain up the b...., as I 
have struggled with them myself, but as you have gone through the issue I would 
suggest to simplifying them.

All the best

Reza
www.qu-s.eu

On 20 Jan 2010, at 18:20, Dave Carlton wrote:

> First impression, nice. Simple but elegant and to the point. I would do three 
> things:
> 
> 1. Make the slogan pop a little more so it grabs your attention after the 
> title.
> 2. A simple list of features with link to more detail,
> 2. Deaccentuate  the development team. 
> 
> On Jan 20, 2010, at 04:05 , MT wrote:
> 
>> Hi guys,
>> 
>> I'm in the final stages of redesigning our website, you can see it here...
>> (Once completed, it'll be moved to our proper domain of course)
>> 
>> http://web.me.com/theescapers/
>> 
>> Any advice/comments/flaming gratefully received.
>> 
>> You can see the old one here...
>> 
>> www.theescapers.com
>> 
>> Thanks a lot!
>> 
>> MT
>> 
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