> -----Original Message-----
> From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Scott 
> Kitterman
> Sent: Wednesday, February 15, 2012 1:13 PM
> To: [email protected]
> Subject: Re: [marf] Reorganizing the AS
> 
> From earlier in the thread:
> 
> > If you change "..., though the means for doing so are not specified in
> > this memo." to "as described above." I think that ties it together.
> > The same text is just above in both, so it works either way.

How about:

", such as the mechanisms described in the examples listed above."

That way it references the mechanisms (which we've already called "examples" in 
earlier in that section) while leaving open the idea that others might come in 
the future.  I think that satisfies both perspectives.

OK with both of you?

-MSK
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