On 23/Feb/12 19:12, Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: > I think the plan is to have this WGLC complete in time to get it on > a telechat before the Paris IETF meeting, so please review and > comment sooner rather than later.
I have four points only: *Solicited and Unsolicited Reports* Section 3 may sound misleading, as it may seem to exclude that unsolicited reports may also be "due to recipients manually reporting messages as spam." (The introduction can be understood both ways.) I propose to replace the first snippet of the second paragraph (Other uses... how these unsolicited reports) with: In case no prior arrangement was made with the origin of a message that deserves being reported, it is some times fit to send the report just the same. We refer to these as unsolicited reports. Since the context and meaning of the reports cannot be established beforehand, the constraints on how these unsolicited reports [...] (Really, solicited/unsolicited sending is transparent to the user or any other stream-wise similar input mechanisms. Is it too late to try and treat #1 of Section 4.1 and #2 of Section 6.2 in a unified common section?) *When To Generate Reports* The title of Section 6.2 should more appropriately be "When /Not/ To Generate Reports", except for the last paragraph that matches neither title. How about moving #5 to the previous (General Considerations) subsection? *Where To Send Reports* SPF doesn't sign. In paragraph #4 of Section 6.3, I'd replace: Where an abusive message is signed using a domain-level authentication technology such as DKIM ([RFC6376]) or SPF ([RFC4408]), the domain that has been verified by the with: Where an abusive message is authenticated using a domain-level authentication technology such as DKIM ([RFC6376]) or SPF ([RFC4408]), the domain that got a "pass" ([RFC5451]) by the (Is it possible to cite IANA's "Email Authentication Result Names" rather than, or in addition to, [RFC5451]?) *What To Do With Reports* No vacation replies. In paragraph #4 of Section 6.5, I'd replace: a reply might be desirable to indicate that the complaint will result in action with: a non-automated reply might be desirable to indicate what action resulted from the complaint _______________________________________________ marf mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/marf
