Hi! This looks very good! A few suggestions to hopefully improve it:
* We should present the admin section before the developer section. I think more people are interested in the changes mentioned there; and there's a small danger that readers drop out during the GTK+ technese. * Likewise, I'd move the menu editor at the top of the admin section. * Maybe "GNOME 2.12 is released on time." instead of "GNOME 2.12 is not an exception"? * Maybe link to /softwaremap instead of gnomefiles directly? I guess some people could be worried about the missing disclaimer (license not clearly indicated). The overall structure is an improvement, IHMO. Cheers, Claus On Sun, 28 Aug 2005 19:28:03 -0400 Luis Villa <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > I've put a cut at some reorged release notes here: > > http://tieguy.org/misc/212releasenotes/index.html > > The main rewriting was on the first page, but I reorged the other > pages. I'll try to make another pass at these tomorrow, but in the > meantime please feel free to read over/critique. If there is consensus > that this is better, I'll check them in tomorrow night. > > One stylistic thing I'd really like to get changed- every image in > these has a <b>Figure 1. > picture-name-which-is-often-the-same-as-the-section-name </b> above > the picture. Can someone with xsl guruness make these blocks more like > in davyd's release notes: > > http://www.gnome.org/~davyd/gnome-2-12/ > > i.e., no uber-formal-totally-uninformative 'Figure X', and italicized > below the image, instead of bolded above the image? > > I am using the xsl bits in: > http://cvs.gnome.org/viewcvs/gnomeweb-wml/docbook_html_style/ > > to generate the stuff, so that is what the changes would have to be > to. > > Thanks- > Luis > -- > marketing-list mailing list > [email protected] > http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list > -- marketing-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list
