On 8/29/05, Claus Schwarm <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hi! > > This looks very good! A few suggestions to hopefully improve it: > > * We should present the admin section before the developer section.
I tend to disagree. > I think more people are interested in the changes mentioned there; > and there's a small danger that readers drop out during the GTK+ > technese. I intend to reduce the GTK technese. > * Likewise, I'd move the menu editor at the top of the admin section. Reasonable. Like I said, I'd like to reorg all three tonight. > * Maybe "GNOME 2.12 is released on time." instead of > "GNOME 2.12 is not an exception"? > > * Maybe link to /softwaremap instead of gnomefiles directly? I guess > some people could be worried about the missing disclaimer (license > not clearly indicated). Just a placeholder. I'd like it to go to gnome.org/applications as I've been discussing with Andreas. Luis > On Sun, 28 Aug 2005 19:28:03 -0400 > Luis Villa <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > I've put a cut at some reorged release notes here: > > > > http://tieguy.org/misc/212releasenotes/index.html > > > > The main rewriting was on the first page, but I reorged the other > > pages. I'll try to make another pass at these tomorrow, but in the > > meantime please feel free to read over/critique. If there is consensus > > that this is better, I'll check them in tomorrow night. > > > > One stylistic thing I'd really like to get changed- every image in > > these has a <b>Figure 1. > > picture-name-which-is-often-the-same-as-the-section-name </b> above > > the picture. Can someone with xsl guruness make these blocks more like > > in davyd's release notes: > > > > http://www.gnome.org/~davyd/gnome-2-12/ > > > > i.e., no uber-formal-totally-uninformative 'Figure X', and italicized > > below the image, instead of bolded above the image? > > > > I am using the xsl bits in: > > http://cvs.gnome.org/viewcvs/gnomeweb-wml/docbook_html_style/ > > > > to generate the stuff, so that is what the changes would have to be > > to. > > > > Thanks- > > Luis > > -- > > marketing-list mailing list > > [email protected] > > http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list > > > -- marketing-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list
