Brian, that's good feedback, and I'll work on the wording in the competitive
section.

One hope I had for putting it on the wiki help from collaborators.  Would
you be willing to help with the accessibility section?  I have some docs
team and GNOME Journal work over the next week or two, and could use the
help.

Thanks.

Paul

On Mon, Jun 15, 2009 at 2:34 PM, Brian Cameron <[email protected]>wrote:

>
> Paul:
>
> The website currently says:
>
> > Linux distributions, such as Fedora or Ubuntu, are usually the primary
> > customer acquisition channel for GNOME's end users.  GNOME also serves
> > the Linux development community, through tools in the GNOME Platform,
> > such as GTK, that both foster development of the GNOME Platform and
> > the applications included in the GNOME desktop and in distributions.
> [...]
> > Almost all end users for GNOME are acquired through the end user
> > choosing to download and install a Linux distribution, such as Fedora
> > or Ubuntu.  Hundreds of Linux distributions exist for users to choose
> > from
> [...]
> > Other UNIX variants, including OpenSolaris and FreeBSD also ship
> > GNOME.
>
> Could the fact that GNOME is provided on non-Linux distributions be
> made more clear without it reading like a footnote?
>
> In the "Competitor Analysis" section I notice that there is no
> information about accessibility.  It would be good to flesh this
> section out with some information about this.  Would be good to touch
> base with the gnome-accessibility-list to get input.  Also refer here:
>
> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comparison_of_Windows_and_Linux
>
> Brian
>
>  I'd like to preface this email with a couple thoughts.  I'd like to
>> apologize for not continuing the brainstorming discussion in recent weeks,
>> but something John said made me take a different approach.  John's right - a
>> lot of this has been discussed before.  With that thought, I decided to
>> write a Marketing Brief.  I used content that was in the wiki, on the web,
>> and my own thoughts and opinions.
>>
>> I'm currently at a docs conference, and one of our keynote speakers said
>> something, that basically sums me up.  Doc writers are perfectionists, and
>> don't like to send stuff out until it's "complete".
>>
>> Well, as you'll see, the Brief is only 75% complete.  You will see
>> comments and questions I have in parantheses and brackets, and whole
>> paragraphs are missing, and a few more citations are needed.  I should know
>> better about harnessing the power of community!
>>
>> You can review it here:  http://live.gnome.org/MarketingBrief2009 - It's
>> on the wiki - so edit, review, and give feedback.  If you disagree with any
>> points I have, let's talk about it here on the list.
>>
>> Additionally, on Tuesday when I return home from this conference, I will
>> send out to the list 2 marketing campaign ideas for GNOME 3.0.  In addition
>> to Claus' campaign idea he posted on the list last month, I think we can
>> have some good discussion about that.
>>
>> Thanks.
>>
>> Paul
>>
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