Ack + thanks. You caught a good one. I'll add the "with". Marketing/PMC-folk: I presume you're OK with the addition as well?
-Sally ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Kelceydamage@bbits" <[email protected]> > To: "[email protected]" <[email protected]> > Cc: Joe Brockmeier <[email protected]>; Chip Childers > <[email protected]>; "[email protected]" > <[email protected]>; Sally Khudairi > <[email protected]>; "[email protected]" <[email protected]> > Sent: Thursday, 21 March 2013, 12:35 > Subject: Re: REVISED (was Re: Talking Points for Graduation) > > I can't help but feel this is grammatically incorrect: > > "It has been proven to be both stable and highly scalable, underpinning > production clouds more than 30,000 physical nodes, in geo-distributed > environments." > > Pretty certain it's missing a "with", as in "underpinning > production clouds with...." > > Thanks > > Sent from my iPhone > > On Mar 21, 2013, at 9:07 AM, Sally Khudairi <[email protected]> > wrote: > >> It has been proven to be both stable and highly scalable, underpinning > production clouds more than 30,000 physical nodes, in geo-distributed > environments. >
