On Sat, May 11, 2013 at 11:06 AM, Jean Weber <[email protected]> wrote: > Apologies for not having got to the brochure earlier. Comments: > * It would look a lot better if automatic hyphenation were turned off. > If some hyphenation is essential to make all the text fit in the space > available, use conditional hyphenation. > * There are some between-word spacing errors in the A4 version > that are obviously caused by many extra spaces having been added > (probably at the ends of lines in the USLtr version. > These extra spaces need to be removed. > * I have a LOT of suggestions for improvements in wording as well as a > few punctuation corrections. I think the easiest way to handle this is > for me to edit the file and create my version for everyone's consideration. > I'll do that and upload to the wiki and post the links here. > > --Jean
Files here: ODT https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-A4_JHW.odt https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-USLtr_JHW.odt PDF https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-A4_JHW.pdf https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-USLtr_JHW.pdf Apologies for lack of change tracking. --Jean -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
