Hi :) Yes, the one you have been working on is a special case of a "leave behind". It's like a follow-up giving more information after you have already hooked someone.
Plus the audience are not just average users and can probably handle a lot more info than normal. Regards from Tom :) >________________________________ > From: Marc Paré <[email protected]> >To: [email protected] >Sent: Saturday, 11 May 2013, 19:47 >Subject: [libreoffice-marketing] Re: Brochure-type: General Information -- >Updated to v.4 (still in edit stage by the marketing team) > > >Le 10/05/13 06:56 PM, Tom Davies a écrit : >> Hi :) >> Yes, 1st and 3rd panels look a lot better. In the middle panel it feels >> like the bullet points are trying to sneakily slope off the page to go down >> the pub. If there was a mirroring white-space on the right of the >> bullet-points to make it more like the Eiffel tower then it would look more >> deliberate or a vertical strip of artwork (using "wrap through") down the >> far left that does line-up with the text under it. >> >> Tbh though i think go with what we have. It is plenty good enough given >> that the top aim is to cram information into it. >> >> err, btw Exchange in the heading in the 1st panel should have an x in it but >> i think that was due to haste and would have been corrected anyway >> Regards from >> Tom :) >> > >Don't forget that the left-hand side of the bullets is a fold line, when >you print the brochure, I think this perception is not as offensive. > >Unfortunately, the General Information brochure does have a lot of >information. I don't think the idea of any brochure is to "cram" a lot >of information into it. The idea is to get the reader to absorb the >information that we, marketers, wish them to retain. Sometimes too much >information is counter-productive and people will say that they will >read it later but never get to it. White space is always good and >sometimes well placed graphics are good as well. > >We have to find a balance with wishing to attract users to our project >and putting enough information on our brochures to make them readable >and understandable. > >Cheers, > >Marc > > >-- >Marc Paré >[email protected] >http://www.parEntreprise.com >parEntreprise.com Supports OpenDocument Formats (ODF) >parEntreprise.com Supports http://www.LibreOffice.org > > >-- >To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] >Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ >Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette >List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ >All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted > > > -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
