Hi Gregory,
Gregory Zobel schrieb:
Regina,
You raise important points:
[..]
WORD CHOICE
*Entrepreneur*
In terms of entrepreneur, would business person or self-employed or small
business owner be better?
"self-employed" and "small business owner" are both better to understand
than "Entreoreneur". "business person" includes staff and is less suitable.
*Industry*
Rather than industry, what would work better: profession? Field?
For me (native German) both "profession" and "Field" sounds better than
"Industry".
And another word: I understand "Government" as "minister". Do you mean
"public administration"?
I have a couple of additional comments re: formatting.:
First, having all the text centered makes it difficult to read (for me at
least).
For me too.
Second, it would be nice to have line breaks between the paragraphs.
In addition
Typo "projet" on first page.
Kind regards
Regina
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