On 11-01-08 07:22 AM, drew wrote:
> Howdy,
>
> Thanks for all the feedback - alright well really need to get this out
> this morning, but it's still 4AM west coast time so have a few hours
> still.
>
> Here is what I have for my text at the moment, which I'm thinking is
> ready to go..although I might touch the third paragraph again...
>
> [...@carl: for me OpenOffice.org is the name, I really feel strongly
> this..thanks if you would bearing with me this time]
Hi Drew, pardon my jumping on this at the last minute - I have not
followed this thread and only recently joined this team, still thought
fresh eyes may help.

> -----------------
>
> LibreOffice is a Free Open Source suite of office applications, 
> available for Linux, Mac OSX and Windows.
That should be "GNU/Linux, Mac OS X and Microsoft Windows" (notice the
space before the X)
> LIbreOffice is developed and supported by The Document Foundation, 
> an independent self-governing meritocracy focused on delivering 
> the best possible document production software to a broad range of
> users.
LibreOffice shouldn't have the capital "I".
> Created by leading members of the OpenOffice.org community, 
> and building on years of dedicated work within that project, 
> from the belief that the culture of an independent foundation 
> brings out the best in contributors of all types.

The above is not a sentence.. should it be ?

> LibreOffice includes applications for all aspects of document
> production:
>
> Writer        - A Word Processor for Every Kind of Document
> Calc  - A Spreadsheet That Meets Any Need
> Impress       - Add Power to Your Presentations
> Draw  - A Powerful Graphics Package
> Math  - The Easy Way to Insert Equations and Formulas in Documents
> Base  - Dynamic Data Delivered
>
> --------------
>
>
I hope this is not out yet and my comments remain useful.

Cheers,

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