For what it's worth, I made a few tweaks to the layout. They're very minor, really, but I think they ease some of the pressure in the text.
ODT: http://files.studioequis.com/LibreOffice/Libo-challenge-enGrayBox.odt PDF: http://files.studioequis.com/LibreOffice/Libo-challenge-enGrayBox.pdf I moved the margins in a bit from the edges so that the top and bottom boxes stick out a bit. The text felt to me like it was crowding the edges. I put the Challenge text in a frame (instead of table), aligned the headline with the text and made the QR a bit bigger. Take it or leave it. I wish I could have helped sooner, but I'm not usually at my desk over the weekend. ..................................................... *rob cummings*, *designer* studio equis, llc *313 530 8002* On Tue, Feb 22, 2011 at 11:28 AM, Marc Paré <[email protected]> wrote: > Le 2011-02-19 14:59, Rob Cummings a écrit : > > I like the revised PDF. A couple thoughts, though.... >> >> I don't like how the "challenge" header isn't centered over its >> corresponding text. I'd probably make it left justified. >> >> I would also try to set apart that whole "challenge" section of text from >> the rest of the document. I imagine it could be set in a very light gray >> box >> with a black border, but the box background shouldn't be too dark that >> the >> QR code is tough to scan. A box at the bottom would sandwich the body text >> between the top banner and bottom box, as well as emphasize the >> fundraising >> challenge by treating it differently. >> >> I suppose the same effect could be achieved with a horizontal rule to >> separate the section and/or maybe a change of font size or style. ...but >> I >> think I'd like a box better, even if it just had a white background.. >> >> Wish I was at my desk to help out. Instead I'm in a car in rural Michigan >> and doing as much as I can on my smartphone. Isn't technology wonderful? >> ;-) >> >> Everything is lookin' good! I'm impressed with how much work is being >> done. >> >> Rob >> >> > Thanks Rob: > > OK, here are two examples. We just need some last critique(s) on these and > then I'll finish up the ES and DE to match these two formats if we all > agree. > > I think that we should also run these through the Design team to make sure > that we are within the branding guidelines. I think we are. > > If any of the design team members are reading this, my apologies for > getting this to you so late but we are all trying as best we can. > > Last time to critique and to suggest. Please do not suggest major changes > unless they are really required. Drew needs time to print these off. I > believe Thursday his time is the absolute deadline. > > Cheers > > Marc > > [1] > http://www.parentreprise.com/images/LibreOffice/Libo-challenge-enBox.odt > [2] > http://www.parentreprise.com/images/LibreOffice/Libo-challenge-enGrayBox.odt > > > > > -- > Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] > List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/us/marketing/ > *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity *** > > -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/us/marketing/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
