On Mon, 2011-05-16 at 15:34 -0400, Marc Paré wrote: > Le 2011-05-16 08:12, drew a écrit : > > On Mon, 2011-05-16 at 03:33 -0400, drew wrote: > >> Howdy, > >> > >> Uploaded a submission of a tri-fold pamphlet for use inside the tall > >> disc case. > >
Hi Marc, Tim, others Just uploaded latest copy, with changes from your email > >> http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/8/86/Na-dvd-insert.pdf > >> > > > > <snip> > > > Thanks for doing this Drew and Tim. Here are my suggestions (remember, > they are only my suggestions): > > ================ > > p.1, panel 1 > > Info > * brief information ... > > *** (suggest a bullet at the start of the blurb) *** > > Install > * has the various ... > > *** (suggest a bullet at the start of the blurb) *** Done > > ================ > > p. 1, panel 2 > > Extensions > An extension ... These include add-ons such as formatting tools, > language tools, and over 180 localised dictionary extensions. > > *** (I don't think you need the rest of the blurb on Mexican > dictionaries and one or more for each country listed. I find it strange > that there are 20 different Mexican dictionaries. We will have to get > some of our Mexican language partners to sort this out. We should also > avoid the use of the 1st person plural "We".) *** > > These extensions, as well as most files ending in the .oxt file > "extension" can be installed by using the default Extension Manager > [Tools>Extension Manager]. > > *** (I tried to condense this sentence, it sounded too choppy.) *** Done - mostly, I used your advice to reword it, looking at it now I see I left a word out, that is needed to make a proper sentence - will fix that next update. > > ================ > > p. 1, panel 2 > > Templates > > There are two types of template files included on the DVD: > > * Files ending with ".oxt" will add templates to the “File > New > > Template and Document“ list. > > *The second type of files are in compressed/archived file groups and can > be unarchived using a standard archive manager program [7Zip is included > in the list on the “Extras” page]. These are sample files that are > opened like normal document files. > > *** (reworked paragraphs, bullet form please) *** Done > > ================ > > p. 1, panel 2 > > Documentation > > Documentation files included on this DVD are in either the ".odt" > OpenDocument file format [ODF], a long established International > Standard [ISO] set of file formats, or, ".pdf" Adobe Acrobat file > format. LibreOffice uses the international standard ODF as its default > office suite file formats. > > *** (I tried to condense this to a stronger paragraph, we should also > not speak of MS in a negative way and MS claims they are following an > ISO approved xml standard anyway. let's not mention them at all in this > passage. No need to sell people on the .pdf format. If they don't know > about it, they can use our format, which is what we are trying to > promote.) *** Done > > ================ > > p. 1, panel 3 > > There are two types of artwork files on the included on the DVD: > > * Files ending with ".oxt" will be added to the "Tools>Gallery" option. > > * The second type of files are in compressed/archived file groups and > can be unarchived using a standard archive manager program [7Zip is > included in the list on the “Extras” page]. These are are individual or > groups of image files that can be used by LibreOffice or any other > packagethat can use image files. > > *** (reworked paragraph to match the Templates paragraph, bullet form > please) *** Done - needed to do a little rewording tom make it fit in the layout > > ================ > > p. 2 panel 2 > > *** Our mission is, IMHO, a little slim. Whereas later we say "Tell the > world you share our visions, join our group and fan page at > http://facebook.com/documentfoundation. There is little vision that we > have given the user on the pamphlet. > This is something we really need to > get to work on as a marketing group. *** Agreed - but space is tight - but I bet there are a few lines still that could be squeezed onto the panel..I'm open for suggestions And I added a little here and there - Thanks Drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/us/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
