On Thu, 2011-05-19 at 12:51 -0400, Marc Paré wrote: > Hi Tim, Drew et al: >
<snip> > Weird, I am still getting an error message: "Une erreur est survenue > lors du traitement d'une page. ColorSpace incorrect." yet all of the > other .pdf files that I have still open with no problems. New upload with all the changes - this pdf generated from LO 3.4 RC1 http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/8/86/Na-dvd-insert.pdf > Anyway, it loads with Okular. Only difference is that with the last pdf (one before this) I changed export options to PDF/A - 1a. <snip> > Comments: > > p.1 panel 1 > > “browse” through its content. Also, you may just use your > file manager [Windows Explorer in Windows] to browse > the contents of the DVD and run/view the files directly > from there. > > > > *** correct spelling of "through". The sentence "Also, you pay ... from > there." suggests a list. So end it with "Also, you pay ... from there, > to:" and then bullet form the list (below) *** > > * Use the DVD with your web page browser: > * Insert the DVD into your DVD drive. > * Browse that drive and find the file name of “index.html”. > * Rightclick the file name and open it into your default web > page browser. > > p. 1 panel 3 > > * The second tpe are compressed/archived ... included]. > > *** start with the word "The" to match the same format as the templates > section and it sounds strange without "The" > > p2. panel 3 > > *** Could we try to coordinate this panel on all pamphlets: Trifold > brochure and NA DVD pamphlet? I would suggest moving the following: > > LibreOffice > The Document Foundation > > Multi-Language Office Suite for > Microsoft Windows > GNU/Linux > Mac OSX > > (NA globe) > > trademark blurb > > Note that this may mean resizing the scatter at the top of that panel > > > For the Trifold pamphlet do the same, but obviously without the NA > globe. *** > > > Cheers > > Marc > > > > > > > -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/us/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
