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https://gerrit.wikimedia.org/r/390081 )

Change subject: Update English thank you letter for 2017
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Update English thank you letter for 2017

Bug: T177878
Change-Id: I613fd0bbda01943f637be1d555f013a02fa182c0
---
M sites/all/modules/thank_you/generators/ThankYou.php
M sites/all/modules/thank_you/templates/html/thank_you.en.html
2 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

Approvals:
  jenkins-bot: Verified
  Ejegg: Looks good to me, approved



diff --git a/sites/all/modules/thank_you/generators/ThankYou.php 
b/sites/all/modules/thank_you/generators/ThankYou.php
index 742c4ea..d93cba1 100644
--- a/sites/all/modules/thank_you/generators/ThankYou.php
+++ b/sites/all/modules/thank_you/generators/ThankYou.php
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 class ThankYou extends RenderTranslatedPage {
        function __construct() {
                // FIXME: drupal var and settings UI
-               $this->title = 
'Fundraising/Translation/Thank_you_email_20161128';
+               $this->title = 
'Fundraising/Translation/Thank_you_email_20171019';
                $this->proto_file = __DIR__ . 
'/../templates/html/thank_you.$1.html';
 
                $this->substitutions = array(
diff --git a/sites/all/modules/thank_you/templates/html/thank_you.en.html 
b/sites/all/modules/thank_you/templates/html/thank_you.en.html
index ea3fcd6..049b106 100644
--- a/sites/all/modules/thank_you/templates/html/thank_you.en.html
+++ b/sites/all/modules/thank_you/templates/html/thank_you.en.html
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 <p>Dear donor,</p>
 {%endif%}
 
-<p>Thank you for your support of Wikipedia and the Wikimedia Foundation. Your 
contribution of {{ (currency ~ " " ~ amount) | l10n_currency(locale) }} 
supports Wikipedia and helps secure the future of free knowledge for 
everyone.</p>
+<p>Thank you for supporting Wikipedia and the Wikimedia Foundation with your 
gift of {{ (currency ~ " " ~ amount) | l10n_currency(locale) }}. Your 
contribution allows us to keep Wikipedia independent. I’d like to tell you why 
that is so important.</p>
 
 {% if "RecurringRestarted" in contribution_tags %}
 <p>We recently resolved a small technical issue which paused some monthly 
recurring donations. We have reinstated your recurring donation, and it will 
process normally going forward. We will not charge you for the months that were 
skipped. Thank you for your patience and your support, and please feel free to 
email don...@wikimedia.org if you have any questions.</p>
@@ -15,26 +15,27 @@
 <p>We recently resolved a technical issue which caused a small number of 
donors to not receive a confirmation of their donation. Please accept this 
email as a thank you for your donation on {{ receive_date }}. We truly 
appreciate your patience and your support, and please feel free to email 
don...@wikimedia.org if you have any questions.</p>
 {%endif%}
 
-<p>
-  <b>Wikipedia is possible because of a powerful idea: that people, like you 
and me, can participate in building the world’s knowledge and making it freely 
available to everyone, everywhere.</b>
-</p>
-
-<p>Today, thanks to the support of millions of volunteer contributors and 
supporters, you can wander Wikipedia for hours. With more than 40 million 
Wikipedia articles and 35 million freely licensed images, Wikipedia can answer 
almost any question, and take you places you’ve never been.</p>
-
-<p>Your donation supports the creation and sharing of free knowledge in real, 
practical ways. It helps us make Wikipedia fast, secure, and accessible to 
everyone in the world. It helps us bring free access to Wikipedia in places 
where high mobile data costs prevent people from going online. It helps us 
support people who are digitizing knowledge currently locked away in analog 
archives. It protects Wikipedia from threats to free knowledge and the open 
internet.</p>
-
-<p>Your support means that you can find the information you need now, wherever 
you may be—to settle a bet with a friend at a dinner party, or to understand 
the world around us.</p>
+<p>Wikipedia is a global project. At the Wikimedia Foundation, we have 
engineers and other staff striving to make your experience on Wikipedia useful 
every day. We are one of the world’s most popular and beloved websites, and we 
are working to make Wikipedia accessible on any internet connection, across any 
device, no matter where you are in the world. We are standing up for the future 
of the open internet and fighting to protect the privacy of our users around 
the world. Each contribution matters, and your {{ (currency ~ " " ~ amount) | 
l10n_currency(locale) }} has a big impact.</p>
 
 <p>
-  <b>Donating to Wikipedia makes you the champion of a powerful idea.</b>
+  <b>Every day, people make critical decisions based on what they read on the 
internet. Wikipedia is a vital resource because it offers free, neutral, and 
unbiased information written by people from all around the world.</b>
 </p>
 
-<p>Wikipedia will continue to evolve, grow, and meet new challenges. We’re 
excited and eager to meet these and more. Your donation will help us get there. 
We can’t thank you enough for your support. On behalf of the Wikimedia 
Foundation, thank you for investing in our future and taking this journey with 
us.</p>
+<p>Wikipedia would not be possible without the shared commitment from our 
readers, editors, and donors like you. We’re able to stay neutral and unbiased 
because you support our independence. People know that they can rely on 
Wikipedia because we are not influenced by any outside stakeholders. We are 
here to make knowledge available to all. This trust is the heart of our 
mission: we are here for you and you are here for us.</p>
 
-<p>Katherine Maher<br/>
+<p>
+  <b>By donating, you are safeguarding the sum of human knowledge now and for 
generations to come.</b>
+</p>
+
+<p>We’re engaged in big picture planning for the future of Wikipedia and the 
role we want to play in the world. Your support makes us optimistic as we forge 
onwards. We can’t thank you enough for supporting Wikipedia, and we hope you 
will continue to stand on the side of knowledge. If you have friends who use 
Wikipedia, please invite them to donate on <a rel="nofollow" class="external 
text" 
href="https://www.facebook.com/sharer.php?u=https%3A%2F%2Fdonate.wikimedia.org%2F%3Futm_medium%3DSocialMedia%26utm_campaign%3DThankYouEmail%26utm_source%3DFacebook";>Facebook</a>
 or <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" 
href="https://twitter.com/intent/tweet?text=I+just+donated+to+%40Wikipedia.+Support+free+knowledge%21+%23iloveWikipedia+https%3A%2F%2Fdonate.wikimedia.org%2F%3Futm_medium%3DSocialMedia%26utm_campaign%3DThankYouEmail%26utm_source%3DTwitter";>Twitter</a>.</p>
+
+<p>With gratitude,<br/>
+Katherine Maher,<br/>
 Executive Director, Wikimedia Foundation</p>
 
-<p>Many employers will generously match employee contributions: please check 
with your employer to see if they have a <a class="external text" 
href="https://wikimediafoundation.org/wiki/Matching_Gifts/form";>corporate 
matching gift program</a>. For your records: Your donation, number {{ 
transaction_id }}, on {{ receive_date }} was {{ (currency ~ " " ~ amount) | 
l10n_currency(locale) }}.</p>
+<p>Many employers will generously match employee contributions: please check 
with your employer to see if they have a <a class="external text" 
href="https://wikimediafoundation.org/wiki/Matching_Gifts";>corporate matching 
gift program</a>.</p>
+
+<p>For your records: Your donation, number {{ transaction_id }}, on {{ 
receive_date }} was {{ (currency ~ " " ~ amount) | l10n_currency(locale) }}.</p>
 
 {% if recurring %}
 <p>This donation is part of a recurring subscription. Monthly payments will be 
debited by the Wikimedia Foundation until you notify us to stop. If you’d like 
to cancel the payments please see our <a 
href="https://wikimediafoundation.org/wiki/Special:LandingCheck?landing_page=Cancel_or_change_recurring_payments&basic=true&language={{
 locale }}">easy cancellation instructions</a>.</p>
@@ -42,4 +43,6 @@
 
 <p>This letter may serve as a record of your donation. No goods or services 
were provided, in whole or in part, for this contribution. Please send mail to: 
Wikimedia Foundation, Inc., P.O. Box 98204, Washington, DC 20090-8204, USA. 
U.S. tax-exempt number: 20-0049703</p>
 
-<!-- 
TI_BEGIN{"version":1,"sourceUrl":"https://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=Fundraising/Translation/Thank_you_email_20161128/en&amp;oldid=16728619","name":"thank_you.en.html","revision":16728619}TI_END
 -->
\ No newline at end of file
+<p>If you do not wish to receive any future fundraising emails from the 
Wikimedia Foundation, you can <a href="{{ unsubscribe_link | raw 
}}">unsubscribe instantly</a>. Please note we will still send you receipts, 
like this one, for future donations.</p>
+
+<!-- 
TI_BEGIN{"version":1,"sourceUrl":"https://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=Fundraising/Translation/Thank_you_email_20171019/en&amp;oldid=17370888","name":"thank_you.en.html","revision":17370888}TI_END
 -->
\ No newline at end of file

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